Feedback Response

In order to improve my blog, I will complete the following tasks:

• A production diary. This will include what was involved throughout the process of creating the opening scene. This will include videos and photos of the set. This will give the viewer a sense of what the set looked like and felt like.
• Early film edits. I will include explanations of why certain clips were not used. This will give a detailed explanation about how we chose the shots that we used.
• Final edit. This will show the finish product of the whole process.
• Evaulation. I will evaluate the whole process. It will include what could have been done differently and what went well during the process.

I am hoping to complete all these tasks by 11th March.

Mr Judge Feedback - Provisional Mark/Level/Grade: Level 4: 16/20

Medal:You have made some excellent progression since your last feedback and have made all the additions. I particularly like the fact you have embedded your initial studio logo idea, you could possibly enhance that post by showing us some drawing designs of that logo in their infancy. Scripts, storyboards are looking excellent. Your group just needs to make sure you finish your actual film as soon as possible, and also start making in roads into how your group will complete their digital evaluations. 

Mission: As you make your film you could add 'production diary' entries that talk us through the challenges of making your film, we could also do with some images from the set, even video clips from when you filmed to give us a sense of the whole production process. 

Your current t interim grade is level 4: (16/20) As you finish your posts including the evaluation, early film edits, final edit, this should increase. 

• Planning and research evidence will be complete and detailed;

• There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience;

• There is excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props;

• There is excellent work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding;

• There is an excellent level of care in the presentation of the research and planning

• Time management is excellent.

Please provide feedback, in the form of a new post, how and when you hope to achieve the tasks. 

	MINIMAL (L1)	BASIC (L2)	PROFICIENT (L3)	EXCELLENT (L4)	TOTAL
1.RESEARCH & PLANNING [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20	16/20
2. CONSTRUCTION – MAIN TASK [40]	0-23	24-35	36-47	48-60
3.EVALUATION [20]	0-7	8-11	12-15	16-20
TOTAL GRADE FOR FOUNDATION PORTFOLIO [100]					/100
Minus -39 = U	40-49 = E	50-59 = D	60-69 = C	70-79 = B	80-100 = A